Tuesday, January 26, 2010

Day TwentyOne

Once Upon a time a baby girl and a baby boy were born on the same day. They were born on totally different sides of the town. The boy was a beautiful rich prince and the girl was a poor girl with a great family. My illustrations will be a beautiful girl and a handsome baby boy with extremely different backgrounds and different clothing that shows that they are totally different.
They boy will be rapped in silk sheets and has a crown on his head with the background of his palace behind him. They girl which is Snow White will be wrapped in a rag that is torn and dirty and the background will be her kitchen where there are dirty dishes in them but everyone is smiling. They are extremely happy to see a baby girl.

6 comments:

  1. i like the image, but "once upon a time" is common. Is that what you were going for?

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  2. I also chose "once upon a time" for my intro as well because i still wanted to keep the idea of fairytale into my folktale. Therefore, once the reader starts reading they can immediately tell that they are reading a fairytale book.

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  3. I think the "once upon a time" keeps it a fairy tale and kids book so I like how you included that. I also like the illustration you chose. It really helps the reader see what you want them to see.

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  4. I like to use imagination when I read a folk-tale or fairy-tale so when using "once upon a time" it already gets you in the imagination mood :)

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  5. Starting off with once upon a time is good. It immediately grabs the kids attention.. good job

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  6. Classic beginning which helps with familiarity in story telling.

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