Over all my story had a good message and I liked it. I know there are many things that i could work on. My story did not flow from page to page it was more like page to page then confusing page then the flowing came back. I need help so Comment Please.
Monday, February 1, 2010
Day Twenty Five
After reading through my manuscript I saw that it was not flowing at all. There were parts that skipped around and confused me so I know that it would confuse a child or any reader. I story had a good point but was not put into the right words. My style was very modernized instead of a little older.
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Good job spotting the lack of flow. Reading and rereading helps an author find the flow. Read it aloud to your family for help also.
ReplyDeleteI think having someone else proof-read your story like a friend or family member would help you out, because I know that they spot things that you might not and they are honest with you and will help you make your story better.
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