Day Thirty

Today is the last day of blogging and I don't think I will miss it. It was a lot of work and I know that it was better than writing on paper the whole time. One day when I am sad I might start a blog about my life but as of now I think that I will leave the blogging alone for a while.

Blogging was a different experience for me though. It was something different and I can tell my little cousins that there is a website where you can right about your feeling when your angry instead of calling me. I am grateful that I got to experience this but it will probably be my last time blogging

Day Twenty Nine

My dedication is really personal. I love my nephew and I am so glad that he was born. When he was born I cried and ever since then I have not been able to let him go. He has always showed me in the oddest ways that life is not given you have to earn it.

My nephew loves children's books and he loves to read. We buy him books every weekend and he sits and tries to read them. He is the best thing that ever happened to me and I want him to know that I love him so much and everything I do is for his better good.

Day Twenty Eight

The title of my story is Snow White and the 10 dwarfs. It is a simple land and a name is easy to remember

1. Snow White and the 10 Dwarfs: a normal folk tale name there really is nothing too big about this name

2. Good Vs. Evil: This is the real moral of the story

3. Snow White and the Poisonous Apple: That is the cause of her deep sleep

4. Mirror Mirror on the Wall: The main reason the Stepmother is angry

5. Who's the Fairest of them all: What the Step mother is angry about and wants to be.

Day Twenty Seven

Well...I was looking over my blurb book and i was trying out the yearbook page. it was really funny. You can write comments about people, ex: if you don't like a girl and she is in the year book you can write "eeww, she is a stupid girl" but thats not what i did. I was thinking about our Blurb Book and why my book keep deleting.

I was looking at other people blogs today and saw that some people are really thinking hard and I want to congradulate Adora Yang, Jordan Adams, Mia Richardson, Lada (cant remember how to spell the last name). Good job ladies and guess what? Your all ladies. Women Power! I need to start putting my pictures in chronological order.

Day Twenty Six

Today I haven't really done anything on blurb book. Everything started to delete by its self. I don't know what is wrong with my computer so i started to write down everything instead of rely on the computer. Everything that i have done is written on a piece of paper. I have started the intro and i really like it.

I am having troubles with the ending and the end of the climax section. It is all looking too modern. I am not having troubles with my illustrations. I actually like this Blurb Book thing if it would stop deleting what I write. I also want to thank Mr.Prier for showing me something new.

Day Twenty Five

After reading through my manuscript I saw that it was not flowing at all. There were parts that skipped around and confused me so I know that it would confuse a child or any reader. I story had a good point but was not put into the right words. My style was very modernized instead of a little older.

Over all my story had a good message and I liked it. I know there are many things that i could work on. My story did not flow from page to page it was more like page to page then confusing page then the flowing came back. I need help so Comment Please.

Day Twenty Four

The climax of my story is going to be when the witch gives Snow White the poisonous apple to eat. It is the climax because it leaves the reader guessing what is going to happen to Snow White after this and makes the reader think a little more. I think this is a good climax because it is when everything about the story gets interesting.

The reader is suspicious and wanting to know more. They do not know how she is going to get out of this situation or what is going to happen to the step mother. They might think that she is going to get away with it and live happily ever after. They do not know how the prince is going to react to the situation either